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A few days ago, I saw a cover of cartoon magazine and it influenced me a lot.Therefore, I decided to mention about child brides and child marriages defined as a formal marriage of informal union before the age of 18.Although child marriages are observed both boys and girls , it affects girls more than boys.There are several reasons to clarify what I mean.For instance, girls have to learn housework and take care of the kids in spite of going to school and enjoying their childhood.Moreover, it is so prevalence that one in every four marriages involves child bride all over the world.There are several corporation trying to raise awareness about this issue.One of them is 'UÇAN SÜPÜRGE' founded in Ankara /Turkey. This corporation is doing a lot of activities to draw attention these marriages.For example, the volunteers working in the Uçan Süpürge try to inform people living rural areas where this case is seen typically and they also inform poor families thinking dowry enhances their economic conditions.The important thing is what we can do about it.We can join one of these corporations to help them.In this way, we contribute to stop child marriages which make girls' life miserable.
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Dear Meltem,
YanıtlaSilI liked your topic you chose. Your journal is generally good and I liked your pictures, but I think that you should improve yourself at some points. For example, you can care about the grammar more because you have done mistake at the fifth line. The word 'several' requires the plural form after itself. In the same way, you have done the same mistake at the last line after 'which'. Anyway, you are good at writing and I liked it. Continue! ;)
Dear Gizem,
YanıtlaSilThanks for your comment.I took consideration your comment and I did the essential regulations in my writing.I felt happy when I read that you had liked my topic.I made my rewrite thanks to you!.Therefore I am waiting your new comments :)